Finding love has always been hard for me. I think I had found that special woman that I will wanted to spend the rest of my life with, but then the bubble would burst. I discovered that what I wanted from the relationship and what I actually had was vastly different. But, with the help of intenet dating and an online dating site, I was able to get out of my shell and find someone I had fun with...
For the love of grammatically correctness...please accept this suggestion for your article. First you should use "an" not "a" in the title. Most specifically, I would like to see an adjustment to your statement about the dating site you once visited. "I first started with a dating site, which is now out of business, because it had a forum area". It sounds as though the reason it went out of business was that it had a forum area. This is confusing and you may want to reword or rearrange the sentence to convey your true thought.
Just a suggestion, hope you didn't mind.
And as a footnote, I, too, found love on an internet dating site. We have been married four years now!
Good luck with your articles.
Julia R.
Comment provided July 03, 2005 at 1:37 pm
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Subject: I found love on an online dating site
For the love of grammatically correctness...please accept this suggestion for your article. First you should use "an" not "a" in the title. Most specifically, I would like to see an adjustment to your statement about the dating site you once visited. "I first started with a dating site, which is now out of business, because it had a forum area". It sounds as though the reason it went out of business was that it had a forum area. This is confusing and you may want to reword or rearrange the sentence to convey your true thought.
Just a suggestion, hope you didn't mind. And as a footnote, I, too, found love on an internet dating site. We have been married four years now! Good luck with your articles. Julia R.